Non scientific prespective

• remove Formulas, because they seem complicated and scary
• the introduction should be easy to understand and provide a clear message
• explain: Thermal comfort and how it is expressed through the PPD. does the higher number mean more discomfort?
• reduce the referencing of the paper to a minimal amount.
• drop/ replace non-intuitive words ["slice", ...]
• explain the 3D graphs
• explain: what are Pareto fronts?
• Energy and GHG emission plots: it would be great if it has clear explanations. I think plots should be used to convey the text better.